Annmarie tagged me with this WIP thingy. Im stealing shamelessly from her blog (as in copying and pasting)
The instructions: Turn to page 123 in your work-in-progress. (If you havenâ€™t gotten to page 123 yet, then turn to page 23. If you havenâ€™t gotten there yet, then get busy and write page 23.) Count down four sentences and then instead of just the fifth sentence, give us the whole paragraph.
I tend to have uhm very short paragraphs, and as it happened, the part I turned to was mostly dialogue so I gave a few lines. A warning for any tender ears/eyes, the following excerpt contains adult words. If you’re easily offended….then what the hell are you doing at my blog anyway? :lol2:
Dark Desires (working title) coming May to Berkley (unedited and all that jazz, not only that, but subject to be completely removed from the final product based on my whim/current mood)
She watched from her periphery but he never looked her way. He backed out of the lot and headed down the long driveway, his gaze locked in front of him.
â€œWant to tell me what all that was about?â€ she asked when they turned onto the highway.
She heard something that sounded like a grunt. Unwilling to let the silence continue, she turned in her seat to face him.
â€œIt was nothing,â€ he muttered.
Her face twisted with incredulity. â€œNothing?â€ She stared at him in shock. â€œI can still feel the marks on my ass, feel your fingers in my pussy. I can still taste you in my mouth.â€
He gaped at her, his eyes wide with surprise. â€œDonâ€™t be crude, Faith. It doesnâ€™t suit you.â€
I’m gonna tag Amy since I know for a fact, she’s finished with the first draft of her WIP so she shouldn’t have any problem looking up the required passage :pffftt:
2 thoughts on “WIP tag”
*gasp* You said a naughty wooooord. My Super readers may not be able to handle this. :weee:
Okay, okay, I’m off to look up my excerpt and post it. :sack:
:kneel: This is why I love your books, you nail the reality of it. You capture the feelings and the thought proccesses of both characters. That dialogue “says” a lot more than it says…
I can’t wait for May Maya!!
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